Tuesday, November 3, 2009

Zen Retreat

Half day leaf retreat.
Rake in hand, branches above.
Some raked up, some fall.

2 comments:

Bulldozers for Sale said...

I like the lines you have written. Underlying meaning can vary from reader to reader according to their perception.

Lao Bendan said...

Yes, there were two meanings in my mind when i posted it. I very much prefer one of the two, but the second isn't bad; just not as good. And, i'm sure there's as many other meanings as there are readers. (Me and you? :-))

Thanks.